This is so short, yet so sweet. I love it. It easily flows in my head. I can easily see this being expanded into a longer poem, but in some ways this kind of form is better. Nice work.
thanks! I was walking around bored and it suddenly popped into my head. I would like to make it longer, but I also agree I like this form. Plus I can't think of anything else to add, especially since I don't know what it is about.
This is so short, yet so sweet. I love it. It easily flows in my head. I can easily see this being expanded into a longer poem, but in some ways this kind of form is better. Nice work.
ReplyDeletethanks! I was walking around bored and it suddenly popped into my head. I would like to make it longer, but I also agree I like this form. Plus I can't think of anything else to add, especially since I don't know what it is about.
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